Obake: Ghost Stories in Hawaii
By Glen Grant
Copyright © 1994 Mutual PublishingSeptember 24. Puunui. Ray has just
dropped me off at home after an hour and a half at St. Francis Hospitals emergency
ward. It is nearly midnight and my face, neck, arms and shoulders are a painful, tender
mess of stitched gashes and scratches.
I knew we should have left this "Dawn" case alone. I sensed it would lead to
danger. The parents said it was a dinner to celebrate their daughters complete
recovery. They should have said temporary remission.
She was actually pretty at the dinner table-pretty to the point of flirtatious. Ray,
enthralled by her girlish charm, doted over her. She ate a full meal and didnt seem
too worse for wear from her inu no tatri. She told me how much she enjoyed my class
when she was at the UH (she identified the class and semester, though I insist I have no
recollection of her). Then about 8:30 she excused herself, saying she was tired and would
like to rest in her room. She kissed her happy, beaming parents "Good night,"
thanked me and Ray once again for our trouble, and quietly retired.
Just as we were making our final rounds of "thank yous" and "delicious
meal" and "no need to go" and "oh, but we must" with the parents,
Dawn calmly called out from behind her closed door, "Papa, come!" She sounded
little-girlish and her father, so thankful to have his daughter back, didnt heed the
sign that instinctively told me "abandon hope all ye who enter." He crossed the
room and silently shut the bedroom door behind him.
It wasnt a scream or any other classic horror story device that broke the
evening. It was a low, rumbling earthquake that shook the walls and floor and toppled the
pictures on the bookcase. It lasted only a few seconds, but it seemed catastrophic. I
called out to Dawns room if she and her father were all right. I received no answer,
so I entered the pitch-dark room. Behind me I heard Ray and the mother picking up broken
dishes and muttering oaths in Japanese. In the light of the open door I saw the father
lying unconscious on the floor, at the foot of the bed.
Above me, on the bed, I heard the vicious growl of a dog. Right by my neck I felt its
hot panting breath and wet saliva. It was crouching, waiting to pounce on me. I wanted to
move, but I sensed with every movement the animal would bear down closer, its muscular
jaws ready to rip into my throat. It had me trapped. I moved forward, inch by inch,
breaking the spell it had over me until I could slowly turn my head to see the beast. Only
it wasnt a dog. It was Dawn. But it was a dog.
The sheets were damp with her blood. Each nail had been ripped from the fingers and
thumbs of both her hands. The bloody pulp was transforming itself into paws, and vicious
claws were quickly growing. She cared her canine teeth, and, before I could escape, my
face and neck and upper torso had been slashed and blood blurred my eyes and a savage dog
snarled and ripped and I was hysterical and a frightened Ray rushed me down the street to
St. Francis Hospital trying to explain to the interns how I had received my hundred
wounds. |